Adventure

Plot:

 
  The book is about three kids who's parents died in a fire. Now they're going to the same city where their parents died. Their cousin, Count Olaf, is trying to get their fortune for himself.

good:

He built up suspense until he got to the climax when they see their friends, the Quagmires. The same thing happened to them. Their parents died in a fire along with their brother. They find a secret pass that leads to their house.

weaknesses:

He needs a little less description. He also needs to stay on one topic longer. He needs to tell more about the villians.
 

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